tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8289273.post3777208617943803152..comments2023-06-25T11:24:57.244+01:00Comments on fairyhedgehog: Writing about sexfairyhedgehoghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14141089706966852951noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8289273.post-86317781054143120392008-04-05T17:05:00.000+01:002008-04-05T17:05:00.000+01:00:)I'm thinking about the narrative as well as the ...:)<BR/><BR/>I'm thinking about the narrative as well as the dialogue. If an omniscient narrator describes a scene in words that the characters would not use, it's very distancing and can be disconcerting.fairyhedgehoghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14141089706966852951noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8289273.post-26307622339958530592008-04-05T16:24:00.000+01:002008-04-05T16:24:00.000+01:00I've always said there's nothing worse than a misp...I've always said there's nothing worse than a misplaced clitoris. LOL<BR/><BR/>I work very hard when I'm writing to have my dialogue SOUND like it's being spoken by my characters, from word choice to sentence structure to flow of thought. You absolutely have to get into your characters' heads. Otherwise you're telling, not showing.<BR/><BR/>IanIanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14497045412007902460noreply@blogger.com